ARC review-Roll the Dice by Mimi Barbour

Roll the Dice by Mimi Barbour

2/5*

Pub Jan 2014

I received a copy of Roll the Dice from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

Before I get into the meat of the review, I want to state up front that there needs to be a content warning for rape. Aurora’s partner is recovering from rape, and is unsure if the baby she’s carrying is her husband’s or her rapists–which is a big part of the plot. The rapist also assaults several other victims. The rape is all off screen, but I think this would a difficult read for a sexual assault survivor.

Having said that, I didn’t hate Roll the Dice, but I didn’t love it either.

Aurora is a detective with the LVPD, and Kai is her new partner, as her old partner, Debbie is on maternity leave. Aurora is after Earl Rhondo, the man who assaulted Debbie. Kai is after him because Rhondo raped his sister, who eventually suicided because of the rape trauma. The book is their hunt for him.

My biggest complaint is that this doesn’t really work as a romance. It’s a gritty crime thriller where the leads just happen to hook up once. There are some feelings, but the love story is not in the foreground of the book. If you are looking for a story that is primarily a romance, you might not be happy. If you like the In Death series, but wish there was less sex, you would probably enjoy this.

My second biggest complaint is that there are some lazy characterizations.

Ham, the ethnically Irish cop says “The skinny little eejit, he’s a bold one he is.” But unless I missed an immigration story in book 1, this feels like just an excuse to write an Irish cop.

A bar owner is referred to as a “Polack,” which even in 2014 was in poor taste.

Finally, the sex. As written, not my cup of tea.

Honestly, if it hadn’t been a Netgalley book, I would have DNF’d it. 2 stars instead of one because it wasn’t a painful read.

Writing Conference

This weekend I am attending WorldCon 76. This is a writing/fan con, and the first that I’ve attended as an author. I’m looking forward to classes like

  • Writing About Fighting
  • Self-Publishing 101
  • Young Adult: Looking at the World Through a Skewed Lens
  • Successfully Negotiating Book Contracts
  • New Ancestral Myths
  • Deep Dive: Idea Versus Story

I won’t have a post Friday or Monday because of the convention, unless there’s some downtime at the con.

This con is aimed primarily at Science Fiction writers, but it’s only twenty minutes away, and I can easily transfer the lessons to romance. And who’s to say I might not want to turn my head that way? I’ve already had a sci-fi story published in Coming Together: Among the Stars. So I’ve learned to never say never about a certain genre.

Signing up for this con and looking at the classes makes me so sad that I couldn’t go to the Romance Writers of America convention this year, and makes me determined to go next year.

 

Under the Mistletoe is closing submissions soon!

I’m so grateful and overwhelmed by the response I’ve gotten for my call, Coming Together: Under the Mistletoe.

However, it’s not too late to submit a story or poem!

book cover coming soon

Want to help your chances? Things I haven’t seen enough of include…

  • Queer characters
  • Persons of color
  • Non-Christmas holidays (Hannukah, Solstice, Kwanzaa, and even though it’s not technically a December holiday, I’d totally be open to a Diwali/Deepavali story)
  • Non-US locations

This doesn’t mean I don’t want you to send in your Christmas story, merely some additional info to inspire those still thinking of what to write.

My story will be the next installment in my North Pole series, which features shape-shifting reindeer, so there’s no idea that’s too out there as long as the story is good. (My North Pole Series stories New on the Naughty List, and A Reindeer by Any Other Name are currently free on my website.)